Six Sentence Sunday 12-11

This week’s Six continues the scene from last week’s. Jaden has fought her captors to keep them from torturing her, only to be knocked unconscious. Now that she’s awake, Jack, Redinger’s assistant, explains what happened.

Jack laughed and stood up. Filth encrusted coveralls sent off a fresh wave of nausea-inducing stink. “That’s my own invention. Redinger’s cattle prod ain’t strong enough to manage vamps, in my opinion.” His habit of dropping entire syllables and running words together made him difficult to understand. “I jerry-rigged one to double the zap – slap it to the base of the spine, and they’re down for the count.”

 

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6 responses to “Six Sentence Sunday 12-11

  1. Thanks, everyone! Glad you liked it.

    Veronica, Jack ends up getting everything he deserves, after he’s a great deal more unpleasant.

    Gemma, thanks. I’ve worked hard at it, and still have a great deal more to go.

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